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It passes the laugh test with me at any rate - keep it up! If you want some more specific suggestions...
* You could try emphasising the worm's individual characters more. On the "Character Profiles" you describe their personalitys, but these don't really come across very well in the strips.
* I like the art - it fits the style really well.
* You could have some characters talk differently based on the different voice packs...
-- Xarak

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Set in the Worms universe, it's basically about the training facility where the Worms learn the art of war. Specifically, four extremely incompetent Worms. And the two hapless NCOs whose duty it is to look after them.

It's my (i.e. PaulPower's) webcomic. The drawing's nowt special, but I'm fairly happy with the humour.

It passes the laugh test with me at any rate - keep it up! If you want some more specific suggestions...

You could try emphasising the worm's individual characters more. On the "Character Profiles" you describe their personalitys, but these don't really come across very well in the strips.
I like the art - it fits the style really well.
You could have some characters talk differently based on the different voice packs...

-- Xarak